Love the voice/personality, but the last three responses were too short and too repetitive. Provide examples dudette. It is your responsibility to clarify.
LyN'aSiA 5/5 ReSpOnSeS
I look forward to reading your responses to the next project, when Fabio-esque novelists like Zane are prohibited. Like Briana, I like the personality in your writing, but we gotta raise that diction just a bit. Everytime I read "you is" it makes the hairs on the back of my neck stand up and beg for medically assisted suicide.
Rachel 6/5 Responses (Nice job Rach!)
You wrote "To much attention is not always good when your doing Illegal things." Ah, the wonderful lessons literature teaches, lol. I like that you are going back and responding to the questions I'm posing to your responses. Good job this quarter.
Britney R. 1/5 Responses
Brit. One response? C'mon. Let's get it together.
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