Friday, December 7, 2007

Chocolate Flava, Zane; Pages 34- 40

This part of my book is about a women who loses her husband so she blames his bestfriend. Tasha and Steve was married for going on ten year and had a 7yr old son toghether. While Tasha stayed at home and took care od the house Steve worked as a police officer. Him and His partener jake ( bestfriend since the seventh grade) always made a pact that if something happened that the would call ttasha in the next hour t let her no that they both were ok. One day while tahsa was watching tv she turned on the new to hear about a police officer being shot an hurt but no name was desclosed. A couple hours later her husbands partner jake was at the door to deliver the terrifyng news that Steve had been shot and he died on the sence. She became felled with rage she ouldnt belve that the love of her life was gone and that she would never see him again. She needed some one to blame and jake was the only person and the room so she turned all her rage on him. "How could you let him get killed? Where were you when he needed you?" She sceamed while scratching him in his face making him bleed. His was so hurt that she would accuse him of leting his bestfriend for several years die she hurted his heart more than she could even imagine. " Honey please calm down yor upset and angry......." befor he could finish his sentece his was hit with an unexpected slap to the face. " dont you honey me! dont you ever call me that again! You get out! I dnt ever want to see your white a@* again" she screamed whie kicking him out er huse. She was so hurt sh nearly lost her mind the man she thought she would spend the rest oof her life with is now gone.

1 comment:

Mr. Malley said...

Ly'Nasia...remember, I am not too concerned with the plot of the book. Look at the list of questions I handed out. Use those to develop your responses.